at the Internet related conferences style could be choosen with a little
bit more freedom than at a classical conference (this freedom allowed me
to contribute a couple of time ;-) )
However I suggest to follow some ~standards~ . In a paper you could give
an URL to an on-line archive of any related information, discussion,
follow-up, however, a paper in a CD or in print should be concise and
compact, I think.
If you can not make a revision now, you should ask for an extension of the
deadline, you might receive it.
Some suggestions:
At the end of your paper there are same poems in Finish. If somebody start
to read a paper from the end ( I often do this!) then he/she will find
something what he would not understand then most probably he/she will give
up.
Therefore it is better to end a paper with some kind of summary or
conclusion section. In your case that could be a summary of your idea what
is the Internet for you.
In the last part of your paper I found some skeleton for future details.
As you had no time to extend your paper with these paragraph, the
inclusion of those references created some side-effects: readers might
become frustrated. Why not to stop at that point where the details are
already in place and add a statement like this : end of part one, more
detail could be found at this or that URL ?
Very best,
Geza
On Thu, 16 Apr 1998, Toni Alatalo wrote:
> On Thu, 16 Apr 1998, Turchanyi Geza wrote:
>
> > Please check if any loose parts remained, if yes, please create a
> > shortened version for this edition of the CD.
>
> I'm working on some things now, havent changed the paper yet however. Was
> wondering if it'd be fun to include the discussions on the CD?
>
> At least for me a lot essential is there. Actually this process of making
> the presentation itself is an important part of the thing :)
>
> ~Toni
>
Geza
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